Ah! I *missed* this. *feels dumb, but blames LJ somehow.*
"Dinah, be careful. The wings. You don't want to roll onto them."
You and merfilly write such a wonderful *kind* Bats that I really am in awe. And you write him in such a way that he doesn't feel out of character when he's being nice, which is something they haven't quite been able to do for me in canon. teddy bears? WTF?
She took three careful, slow, deep breaths, in with calmness, push out the fear... and she nodded slowly. Aw! That's so very Dinah like. Actually, so is the whole wavering back and forth that she does about being in pain, wanting to scream, not wanting to show it, not wanting to give in to Batman. Your Dinah muse might not have wanted to cooperate in the beginning, but she apparently paid you back in spades.
That made her strangely unhappy, and some trace of it must have flashed across her face, because his jaw tightened. *g* Oh, Dinah, honey, you have the worst taste in men.
"I--it's all right, I wouldn't normally have a problem keeping pace with you, but--" This is a great detail that really *shows* us how the wings are affecting her skills.
//Oh these stupid things. Shayera, how do you do this?!// ;) Aw, Hawkgirl love.
I loved and look forward to the next part, of course. I will try not to be stupid and miss it by several days. *scowl.*
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Date: 2006-08-15 06:25 am (UTC)"Dinah, be careful. The wings. You don't want to roll onto them."
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teddy bears? WTF?She took three careful, slow, deep breaths, in with calmness, push out the fear... and she nodded slowly.
Aw! That's so very Dinah like. Actually, so is the whole wavering back and forth that she does about being in pain, wanting to scream, not wanting to show it, not wanting to give in to Batman. Your Dinah muse might not have wanted to cooperate in the beginning, but she apparently paid you back in spades.
That made her strangely unhappy, and some trace of it must have flashed across her face, because his jaw tightened.
*g* Oh, Dinah, honey, you have the worst taste in men.
"I--it's all right, I wouldn't normally have a problem keeping pace with you, but--"
This is a great detail that really *shows* us how the wings are affecting her skills.
//Oh these stupid things. Shayera, how do you do this?!//
;) Aw, Hawkgirl love.
I loved and look forward to the next part, of course. I will try not to be stupid and miss it by several days. *scowl.*