ext_63931 ([identity profile] coldfiredragon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sylph_fics 2006-08-26 04:06 pm (UTC)

I'm sorry I didn't leave a comment earlier. I totally read it and was so like *happy squeal* that I lost it. I love and adore this and think it goes a long way in deepening the fear the Dinah has of Slade. Vincent should pick up on the change when he sees the too of them together but have no idea what has happened. Dinah can't tell him either because I see that somehow violating her agreement with Slade.

The threat to keep her away from the other survivors was something she could not allow to happen so I think she choose well to take the phsical.

The fact that she got off on the strictly physical is just hot. Wow, so well done it was amazing.

To hear him bringing her to heel by calling her "girl" sent chills down my spine. I would love to see him calling her that where Vincent would hear, just to create conflict... Me? sucker for punishment? I would have never guessed.

Loved it all though, amazing job Yena. It fits perfectly into Merfilly's 'verse and I can't wait to see where this goes.

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