Once again I just don't have time to really do this justice in a comment, but once again I wanted to drool over your Bruce/Dinah/Ollie dynamic. Bruce claiming something as "mine" is just about the most severe kink around, hot as hell, and the fact that he's willing to amend to "mine and Ollie's"--oh, that speaks infinite volumes, doesn't it? The Bruce/Dinah sex scenes were blazingly good, the meal in the restaurant was adorable, and the plot moves along with grace and agility and excitement. These stories deserve so much more than these random burblings, really.