Other than during his visit a few days earlier to one of the city's best tailors, he had not been in Hong Kong as Bruce Wanye, posing as merely a well-off businessman taking a holiday with his sons. That all changed the night after Dinah's arrival. I like this. It shows a very good split in Bruce's pesonality. You should the split between the real Bruce Wayne and Brucie the Twit. And I like that, because I like him having *three* identities, not just two, as some people like to give him (Bats and BtT.)
Anyway, some reasons why your Bruce wins: "Yes, I think you can. I'm a little confused by the menu, what would you say would be the best meal for such a lovely woman, and also for myself?"
He smiled back, delight on his face, and chuckled. "Well, let's hope I can come close to meeting your dreams, then. Quite a lot to live up to, though..."
"Oh. Wonderful is definitely the word... rather like you."
The BtT you give could, I suppose, be more Twittish. But the one you wrote here resembled the Begins Twit. He wasn't . . .mmm. . .flaky?. . .enough to be Comics-BtT. But a.) I like Begins Twit better and b.) It makes sense, to me, that Bruce's contentment with Dinah/Ollie would dial back his Twittiness. He's still a Twit, but not as outrageously twitty. . which works for me, at any rate.
Also. . ."No, I don't, but they've tried that before and failed miserably. What makes this any different?" //I'd rather just leave him rot...// He wanted to pin Dick to something solid and make him swear he wouldn't do anything... rash, flicks of that red and black wrong armor in his mind. //Stop that. He promised. (Not the first time he'd have bro--) Oh no. Knock it off.//
I love that. It has nothing to do with Brucie The Twit. But I love it. *hugs Roy hard, and kicks Dick for old time's sake.*
"Better...Dinosaurs that all his skills did not save his butt from...and rain...and a nasty bunch of Japanese world war two soldiers and scientists," she continued, until Ollie couldn't help but grin and lean over to kiss her. I like the sound of this, by the way. And the Roy in my head likes it too. But I sense more is afoot, so I wait patiently.
Also? Dinah in the BtT scene was fabulous - sharp and able to match whatever BtT threw her way. *g* Fabulous.
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Other than during his visit a few days earlier to one of the city's best tailors, he had not been in Hong Kong as Bruce Wanye, posing as merely a well-off businessman taking a holiday with his sons. That all changed the night after Dinah's arrival. I like this. It shows a very good split in Bruce's pesonality. You should the split between the real Bruce Wayne and Brucie the Twit. And I like that, because I like him having *three* identities, not just two, as some people like to give him (Bats and BtT.)
Anyway, some reasons why your Bruce wins:
"Yes, I think you can. I'm a little confused by the menu, what would you say would be the best meal for such a lovely woman, and also for myself?"
He smiled back, delight on his face, and chuckled. "Well, let's hope I can come close to meeting your dreams, then. Quite a lot to live up to, though..."
"Oh. Wonderful is definitely the word... rather like you."
The BtT you give could, I suppose, be more Twittish. But the one you wrote here resembled the Begins Twit. He wasn't . . .mmm. . .flaky?. . .enough to be Comics-BtT. But a.) I like Begins Twit better and b.) It makes sense, to me, that Bruce's contentment with Dinah/Ollie would dial back his Twittiness. He's still a Twit, but not as outrageously twitty. . which works for me, at any rate.
Also. . ."No, I don't, but they've tried that before and failed miserably. What makes this any different?" //I'd rather just leave him rot...// He wanted to pin Dick to something solid and make him swear he wouldn't do anything... rash, flicks of that red and black wrong armor in his mind. //Stop that. He promised. (Not the first time he'd have bro--) Oh no. Knock it off.//
I love that. It has nothing to do with Brucie The Twit. But I love it. *hugs Roy hard, and kicks Dick for old time's sake.*
"Better...Dinosaurs that all his skills did not save his butt from...and rain...and a nasty bunch of Japanese world war two soldiers and scientists," she continued, until Ollie couldn't help but grin and lean over to kiss her.
I like the sound of this, by the way. And the Roy in my head likes it too. But I sense more is afoot, so I wait patiently.
Also? Dinah in the BtT scene was fabulous - sharp and able to match whatever BtT threw her way. *g* Fabulous.