ilyena_sylph: picture of Labyrinth!faerie with 'careful, i bite' as text (dick/roy)
ilyena_sylph ([personal profile] ilyena_sylph) wrote in [personal profile] sylph_fics 2006-08-19 07:32 am (UTC)

Re: Part II

""Shh... easy. Everything's all right, and you'll get what you need, I promise... but I've been missing your mouth...""
*mutters incoherently.* Oh, my boys. I'm trying really hard not to connect that sentence with current canon, but it's hard. Also, the imagery of Dick saying that to Roy is what melted me into the pile of goo.

It is? *grins* awesome. I love that I got you that much.

I love this - because there's so much *trust* there, that allows Dick to *take* from Roy, when he won't from anyone else. I hope my meaning of take is clear there, because you killed my brain too much to have any hope of describing it more coherently.

Meaning was perfectly clear, and yes. That's why it worked for them.

Seriously? The image of a collared Roy calling Dick "Sir" is pretty much the greatest image ever. I sound like a retarded little fangirl in this feedback, but Christ (or the deity of your choice), I will be your retarded little fangirl after this story.

*grins* You have no idea how long the three of us went roundabout over what Roy would and wouldn't call him and what it takes for even that to come out of his stubborn-proud mouth--that's when Dick knows he's got Roy in the palm of his hand, when Roy needs to say that title...

And there was a swatting! *joy*.

*G* Yes, yes there was.

It's Naughty, Sly Dick the Dom. And it's a new kink of mine. *tosses away all thoughts of Dick the sub, because In Charge Nightwing is so much better.*

Isn't he just wicked? *Grins* I gave you a new kink! Yay! (oh, nonono. Dick's a beautiful little sub sometimes, too. No throwing those thoughts away)

Ahhh. I love when Roy gets so excited that he forgets to talk in English.

I do, too, and I love that after Devin you can pretty much bet it's canon accurate. Who doesn't slip to their first language when... yeah.

Squee!Flail! This is perfect, and it's perfect that it comes at the end of the story, and not the beginning.

So much of this works for me. . The way Roy's body automatically responds to Dick's touch. . . The implicit and unfailing trust that Roy has the minute Dick's hands reach him. . . This is *them* and this is *what they do in their bedroom.* The imagery is perfect, the sex (which I didn't bother quoting, because I frankly would have quoted the whole thing) is hot, and it's all around fabu, darling.

I liked it a lot, is what I'm trying to say.


*beams* Yeah. For them, that had to be the ending, not the beginning.

I am joyous beyond belief that this works for you. *smiles* That's my boys, yes. Trust and faith and "This is *them* and this is *what they do in their bedroom*" YES! Yes yes yes it is. *beams* Squeeflailjoy! that you think the imagery is perfect, that's *hugs self giddily* I am also joyous that the sex is hot to someone not me. *hums in delight*

I'm so very, very glad.

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