This confuses me, though, Dick's kind of off-screen in this one, could you elaborate?
I meant Bruce's reactions to watching Dick talking to himself in his apartment, wracked with guilt, his lack of control as visualized through his own actions throughout the storyline. And Bruce's own actions, controlled and planned how he always acts- even when he's a breath away from snapping- contrasting sharply with it.
He took a soft, hissing breath as that black rage ran through his veins again at the look on Dick's face. He looked... heartbroken, shattered, drawn in on himself--//like he looked when you fired him,//--and small in a way he simply shouldn't.
That bit in particular and the comment about how Dick should never sound so broken really stroke a chord in me. And I'll very, very happily wait for more from you :)
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I meant Bruce's reactions to watching Dick talking to himself in his apartment, wracked with guilt, his lack of control as visualized through his own actions throughout the storyline. And Bruce's own actions, controlled and planned how he always acts- even when he's a breath away from snapping- contrasting sharply with it.
He took a soft, hissing breath as that black rage ran through his veins again at the look on Dick's face. He looked... heartbroken, shattered, drawn in on himself--//like he looked when you fired him,//--and small in a way he simply shouldn't.
That bit in particular and the comment about how Dick should never sound so broken really stroke a chord in me. And I'll very, very happily wait for more from you :)