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ilyena_sylph ([personal profile] ilyena_sylph) wrote in [personal profile] sylph_fics 2007-01-06 02:59 am (UTC)

Re: Part Tim

And Tim! How I loved him here.

*cuddles the Timmy* He really needs them.

I loved the way you returned to the hopeful versus pragmatic voice.

Thanks. It was kind of an integral part of the first one's style, so it had to be re-used. And it works for Tim's complicated little brain.

I don't think I mentioned it for "Puberty," but the voices, in addition to being Tim versus Robin and hopeful versus practical, work very well as YJ!Tim versus Titans!Tim. Titans!Tim is more sober, more Battish - even as he is obstensibly closer to Kon. And when Kon mentioned about missing his YJ!Tim's smile, it just gave me great glee because it secreted the fact that little YJ!Tim was crying out for Kon as much as Kon was wanting that part of Tim to come back.

*squeals* You GOT it! Yougotityougotityougotit!!!!! *hugs you tight*

Such wonderful layers you've woven here.

This? Is why I love it to bits when you read my stuff.

Again, merely a few lines of his that I loved;

*beams at you*

Oh, my merciful heavens, but this was perfect. It's such a TIM-description of having his heart-broken in two.

Thank you so very, very much. *beams* Tim has such hatred for being out of control/disorganized, it seemed the perfect way of phrasing it.

Gods, but it's amazing how simultaneously wonderful/agonizing the Bats can be when they drop the Batty disguise and to thine ownselves are true. OW.

Only in his own head though. Only deep inside his own head. But yes. Owwies.

HA! to the Selina+Timmy exchange. *potentially adds to 12 days of crack pairings.* I loved the Selina voice you captured. It was the perfect mix of warm/seductive/naughty/caring that defines the character for me.

I stressed over Selina... you have NO idea how much. Or how much I adore hearing that you enjoyed her. She's... difficult. Which, of course, is how she should be.

*cries for him.* Ah, such a young little Robin, and yet the feelings of self doubt and loathing start to creep in. Fight it, precious.

Kon'll make it better. Eventually.

I. . . am possibly going to steal that for iconage, I think. It sums up DC so well. Also, it was a gloriously Timmy thought to have. So self aware.

…good point. Can I get sharage on the icon? Yes, it does sum up DC rather well… and well, Tim knows his own head probably too well.

Such a pretty play on words. And it seems appropriately Battish to make an analogy based on knife wounds and gunshot wounds. :)

Thank you. I thought so at the time. Still do, really. It's so much of their lives, after all.

Such pretty smut, too. Such pretty, in character smut.

*delighted purring*

is a glorious mental image, but more importantly, sums up the person that Tim is, the person that Kon is, and how they relate to each other so well.

Thank you. So much. That's about the best thing you could have said to me about this smut, any smut, or my fic in general.

This, again, was wonderful. It captured Kon/Tim perfectly.

*Beaming* Thank you so much.

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