ext_63931 ([identity profile] coldfiredragon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sylph_fics 2006-09-17 05:15 pm (UTC)

This was very well handled and I love how you brought almost everyone you could think of in.

I feel so badly for them all, especially Rae, Tim, Vic, Gar, Kon, Cassie... so many others.

Rae's raw emotion and everything it evoked in Tim was just gut-wrenching, especially knowing that it's never going to be okay again because the person he is worried most about is the one who made this all happen. At least he will have Kon to keep him grounded somewhat.

The part that really got me though, was the way they all formed in groups and left the center open for their inspirations and the heart-wrenching fact the not a single one of them was there.

Eager to see how they all band together and how they all react when the truth comes out.


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