Watching Raven work so hard not to disturb the others, to show so much emotion when she's normally so restrained... this was masterfully done. You both managed brilliantly to show the solemnity of the situation without making it feel forced, or set up. I bow to your superior writing skills.
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Watching Raven work so hard not to disturb the others, to show so much emotion when she's normally so restrained... this was masterfully done. You both managed brilliantly to show the solemnity of the situation without making it feel forced, or set up. I bow to your superior writing skills.