Okay, skipping the sex for now and jumping straight to the end. What are you thinking Slade? Sending Dick into Gotham without backup, especially when no one knows where he has been, and in the middle of a relief effort. That screams trouble. He's going to run into someone and it isn't going to be pretty.
Personally I'm hoping its not Batman. I think Slade needs to be close to Dick when that revalation occurs. The Bat needs to see the full change in Dick and he isn't going to see that unless Slade is right there making it quite clear how possessive he is of Dick and who the kid belongs to now. That is just me of course. I'm quite looking forward to whatever is going to happen to Dick in the next chapter.
Now the sex. I love them in the shower. The mental image of Dick pressed against Slade under the spray and Slade leaning down to kiss him is just damn hot.
Dick's utter submission and need to please while being please is just perfect in all degrees. I adore the idea of him pressed against the shower wall with his arms above his head and his legs splayed open.
I agree with Nightwing_subs though, that bed needs to be used by the two of them. Maybe some celebration sex when everything has calmed down again or some comfort sex when Dick gets back from whatever is going to happen while he is in Gotham.
Canary's reaction to finding out about Dick and Slade was perfect, being angry at Slade and while while concerned for Roy. The way Roy phrases it when she confronts him with it. I'm almost positive she was expecting surprise and then to get "Did I know what? That Slade owns him just as much as Dick owns me? Yes, Dinah. It's a little hard to miss." came as a bit of a shock.
I can't believe she didn't know. Talk about oblivious. It's pretty clear that Slade owns Dick heart and soul. Why did she think Dick was won over and working for him in the first place?
Her line about "Always knew from your talk about the Titans that Slade was fascinated with Dick...but thought it was the Batman/Robin kind of relationship, not..." She shivered violently, her own private thoughts playing over other events. That is so perfectly true her own private thoughts playing over other events that part confuses me though, what was she mentally referencing?
The tiny part with Rose and Roy at the end was just hilarious. I love Rose's eagerness to hear embarrasing tales about her 'older brother'. It was very heart warming in a way.
Final comments about the part with Ollie and Hal. I'm so glad Hal is there for him or Ollie would be loosing it. He's trying so hard to keep things in check and he's slowly cracking under the pressure. It's just heartbreaking. I'm glad he's on the right track though even if he got derailed by thinking about Cheshire. He's right though they would never work together on anything and without knowing that Slade's MO has changed since taking in Dick they would have no real way to know it was Slade.
Very interested to see what kind of protections Slade is going to take if the magic keeping his new 'family' off the radar falls. I'm assuming that the protection spell is what was threatened by magic running amock.
Great chapter, it leaves a lot of questions open for the next one. I can't wait to see what you do with Dick in Gotham and I'm eager to see what Slade got called away for.
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Personally I'm hoping its not Batman. I think Slade needs to be close to Dick when that revalation occurs. The Bat needs to see the full change in Dick and he isn't going to see that unless Slade is right there making it quite clear how possessive he is of Dick and who the kid belongs to now. That is just me of course. I'm quite looking forward to whatever is going to happen to Dick in the next chapter.
Now the sex. I love them in the shower. The mental image of Dick pressed against Slade under the spray and Slade leaning down to kiss him is just damn hot.
Dick's utter submission and need to please while being please is just perfect in all degrees. I adore the idea of him pressed against the shower wall with his arms above his head and his legs splayed open.
I agree with Nightwing_subs though, that bed needs to be used by the two of them. Maybe some celebration sex when everything has calmed down again or some comfort sex when Dick gets back from whatever is going to happen while he is in Gotham.
Canary's reaction to finding out about Dick and Slade was perfect, being angry at Slade and while while concerned for Roy. The way Roy phrases it when she confronts him with it. I'm almost positive she was expecting surprise and then to get "Did I know what? That Slade owns him just as much as Dick owns me? Yes, Dinah. It's a little hard to miss." came as a bit of a shock.
I can't believe she didn't know. Talk about oblivious. It's pretty clear that Slade owns Dick heart and soul. Why did she think Dick was won over and working for him in the first place?
Her line about "Always knew from your talk about the Titans that Slade was fascinated with Dick...but thought it was the Batman/Robin kind of relationship, not..." She shivered violently, her own private thoughts playing over other events. That is so perfectly true her own private thoughts playing over other events that part confuses me though, what was she mentally referencing?
The tiny part with Rose and Roy at the end was just hilarious. I love Rose's eagerness to hear embarrasing tales about her 'older brother'. It was very heart warming in a way.
Final comments about the part with Ollie and Hal. I'm so glad Hal is there for him or Ollie would be loosing it. He's trying so hard to keep things in check and he's slowly cracking under the pressure. It's just heartbreaking. I'm glad he's on the right track though even if he got derailed by thinking about Cheshire. He's right though they would never work together on anything and without knowing that Slade's MO has changed since taking in Dick they would have no real way to know it was Slade.
Very interested to see what kind of protections Slade is going to take if the magic keeping his new 'family' off the radar falls. I'm assuming that the protection spell is what was threatened by magic running amock.
Great chapter, it leaves a lot of questions open for the next one. I can't wait to see what you do with Dick in Gotham and I'm eager to see what Slade got called away for.