ilyena_sylph: picture of Labyrinth!faerie with 'careful, i bite' as text (youngbat)
ilyena_sylph ([personal profile] ilyena_sylph) wrote in [personal profile] sylph_fics 2006-12-01 03:33 am (UTC)

Alright, back with a more in depth review

Yaaay!!

"--and when would they learn to stay out of his city--"

Pigs flying will be involved probably. Criminals are a stupid lot Bats, remember?


True enough. Very much true enough, but the magic users really ought to learn that Gotham doesn't like them.

It amuses the heck out of me that your boys tend to swear in foreign languages.

I figure they know them, they'd use them... and Bruce's only two years from having learned most of those...

*snicker* He beat Ollie at de-aging.

Yes, yes he did. By a decent bit, too.

Eesh, so far his memories are fine,sort of, but it hasn't even been a full day yet.

"Fine sort-of" is an excellent way to put it. Thank you!

and yet is perfectly find wandering around Blood's apartment that way.

Yes, but Jason is his friend.

that alway sounds uncomfortable to me. Don't know why, but that much energy would probably have someone vibrating like a bass drum.

I tend to think so, too.

Oh boy, angsty, hormonal, bats. This is going to be one interesting ride. Can't wait for the next part. Great job.

*snicker* yes, yes it is. Very interesting indeed.

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