And he points out that he and Roy were never exclusive, examples Chesh, Donna, and Grace.
Not being exclusive is one thing. Treating his lover like crap and proposing to some other woman is another.
*can hear your Dick muse protesting from several states away.* I know you're sorry, Dick. But still. *throws him a cookie.*
Also, you make me feel so much better. I worried about that piece like crazy. You rule.
*hugs.* If it hadn't been for The Barry, Raven's internal monologue would have been my favorite part of the whole fic. It was just deliciously Adult, and full of the world-weary woman that *has* to forgive Rose, for all the reasons she listed. . .yet is human enough to that hesitation that *any*one in her position would feel justified at having.
So. Yeah. There's really no need to stress over the Raven characterization. She was perfect. IMO, anyway. *g*
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Date: 2006-11-30 06:24 pm (UTC)Not being exclusive is one thing. Treating his lover like crap and proposing to some other woman is another.
*can hear your Dick muse protesting from several states away.* I know you're sorry, Dick. But still. *throws him a cookie.*
Also, you make me feel so much better. I worried about that piece like crazy. You rule.
*hugs.* If it hadn't been for The Barry, Raven's internal monologue would have been my favorite part of the whole fic. It was just deliciously Adult, and full of the world-weary woman that *has* to forgive Rose, for all the reasons she listed. . .yet is human enough to that hesitation that *any*one in her position would feel justified at having.
So. Yeah. There's really no need to stress over the Raven characterization. She was perfect. IMO, anyway. *g*