"Shh... easy. Everything's all right, and you'll get what you need, I promise... but I've been missing your mouth..." *mutters incoherently.* Oh, my boys. I'm trying really hard not to connect that sentence with current canon, but it's hard. Also, the imagery of Dick saying that to Roy is what melted me into the pile of goo.
The hand hooked in the collar pulled him gently lower, pressing another spot against his mouth, demanding his attentions where Dick wanted them and nowhere else I love this - because there's so much *trust* their, that allows Dick to *take* from Roy, when he won't from anyone else. I hope my meaning of take is clear there, because you killed my brain too much to have any hope of describing it more coherently.
"I... I need you, I can't think for how much I need to feel you, how good this is how glad I am you knew what I needed and I ache wanting you... Dick, Sir, please..." Seriously? The image of a collared Roy calling Dick "Sir" is pretty much the greatest image ever. I sound like a retarded little fangirl in this feedback, but Christ (or the deity of your choice), I will be your retarded little fangirl after this story.
And there was a swatting! *joy*.
"Please, what, my own?" voice as innocent as driven snow It's Naughty, Sly Dick the Dom. And it's a new kink of mine. *tosses away all thoughts of Dick the sub, because In Charge Nightwing is so much better.*
that he wasn't sure were even in english anymore, Ahhh. I love when Roy gets so excited that he forgets to talk in English.
Soon enough he'd pick the load back up, not right now....
Squee!Flail! This is perfect, and it's perfect that it comes at the end of the story, and not the beginning.
So much of this works for me. . The way Roy's body automatically responds to Dick's touch. . . The implicit and unfailing trust that Roy has the minute Dick's hands reach him. . . This is *them* and this is *what they do in their bedroom.* The imagery is perfect, the sex (which I didn't bother quoting, because I frankly would have quoted the whole thing) is hot, and it's all around fabu, darling.
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Part II
Date: 2006-08-19 07:07 am (UTC)*mutters incoherently.* Oh, my boys. I'm trying really hard not to connect that sentence with current canon, but it's hard. Also, the imagery of Dick saying that to Roy is what melted me into the pile of goo.
The hand hooked in the collar pulled him gently lower, pressing another spot against his mouth, demanding his attentions where Dick wanted them and nowhere else
I love this - because there's so much *trust* their, that allows Dick to *take* from Roy, when he won't from anyone else. I hope my meaning of take is clear there, because you killed my brain too much to have any hope of describing it more coherently.
"I... I need you, I can't think for how much I need to feel you, how good this is how glad I am you knew what I needed and I ache wanting you... Dick, Sir, please..."
Seriously? The image of a collared Roy calling Dick "Sir" is pretty much the greatest image ever. I sound like a retarded little fangirl in this feedback, but Christ (or the deity of your choice), I will be your retarded little fangirl after this story.
And there was a swatting! *joy*.
"Please, what, my own?" voice as innocent as driven snow
It's Naughty, Sly Dick the Dom. And it's a new kink of mine. *tosses away all thoughts of Dick the sub, because In Charge Nightwing is so much better.*
that he wasn't sure were even in english anymore,
Ahhh. I love when Roy gets so excited that he forgets to talk in English.
Soon enough he'd pick the load back up, not right now....
Squee!Flail! This is perfect, and it's perfect that it comes at the end of the story, and not the beginning.
So much of this works for me. . The way Roy's body automatically responds to Dick's touch. . . The implicit and unfailing trust that Roy has the minute Dick's hands reach him. . . This is *them* and this is *what they do in their bedroom.* The imagery is perfect, the sex (which I didn't bother quoting, because I frankly would have quoted the whole thing) is hot, and it's all around fabu, darling.
I liked it a lot, is what I'm trying to say.