Date: 2006-10-21 02:59 pm (UTC)
Your Ollie is so spot-on...totally annoying and unlikeable and just when you're finally ready to give up on him entirely, he pulls out something like:

Ollie winced. "No, son...I've been too damned busy thinking of what I did to you because of this." Now he met those eyes full on, laying the truth of his own pain out to be seen.

And you do remember why you like him.

Connor could not help the curl of his voice over the name of his best friend.


Ah, nice little touch there, and so nicely written. I miss Connor/Kyle very much.

I've really liked this series, it does such an interesting job of exploring all the complicated, tangled Bat/Arrow connections. And throw a couple of Lanterns in there for good measure, I guess! :)

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