One of the things our dear beta was so insistent on was the *creepy* coming through, because it *should*: he loves her. He is stupid in love with her. He is a *creepy supernatural entity* and if she had the sense God gave a doorknob she would be running like buggery in the other direction.
Melissa breaks my heart really a *ton*. I hope she got her dreams.
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Date: 2009-01-22 04:08 am (UTC)Melissa breaks my heart really a *ton*. I hope she got her dreams.
Thank you! :DDDDDDD