And Tim! How I loved him here. I loved the way you returned to the hopeful versus pragmatic voice. I don't think I mentioned it for "Puberty," but the voices, in addition to being Tim versus Robin and hopeful versus practical, work very well as YJ!Tim versus Titans!Tim. Titans!Tim is more sober, more Battish - even as he is obstensibly closer to Kon. And when Kon mentioned about missing his YJ!Tim's smile, it just gave me great glee because it secreted the fact that little YJ!Tim was crying out for Kon as much as Kon was wanting that part of Tim to come back.
Such wonderful layers you've woven here.
Again, merely a few lines of his that I loved;
non-linear, disorganized, chaotic array of flashes of memory ripped through him, dragging out emotions as they whipsawed through his mind, leaving his heart as raw as it had been while he washed the traces of their encounter from his skin Oh, my merciful heavens, but this was perfect. It's such a TIM-description of having his heart-broken in two.
=It’s too long between weekends as it is, if he didn’t want to see me at all, I... don’t know what I’d do.= Gods, but it's amazing how simultaneously wonderful/agonizing the Bats can be when they drop the Batty disguise and to thine ownselves are true. OW.
HA! to the Selina+Timmy exchange. *potentially adds to 12 days of crack pairings.* I loved the Selina voice you captured. It was the perfect mix of warm/seductive/naughty/caring that defines the character for me.
You’re just the (dirty little) secret he wishes he didn’t have to keep./ *cries for him.* Ah, such a young little Robin, and yet the feelings of self doubt and loathing start to creep in. Fight it, precious.
It was interesting how easily hope turned to bitterness, he noted idly. I. . . am possibly going to steal that for iconage, I think. It sums up DC so well. Also, it was a gloriously Timmy thought to have. So self aware.
Bitter, bitter laughter on his ears, and if the expression was a knife that sound was a gunshot wound Such a pretty play on words. And it seems appropriately Battish to make an analogy based on knife wounds and gunshot wounds. :)
Such pretty smut, too. Such pretty, in character smut. Kon moaned, not soft, and bucked back against him again, //Oh... oh, yes...// trying to get him deeper, get more... the angle wasn’t right, he needed--"Tim, more..." he begged, sure Tim would know how to make this perfect.. is a glorious mental image, but more importantly, sums up the person that Tim is, the person that Kon is, and how they relate to each other so well.
This, again, was wonderful. It captured Kon/Tim perfectly.
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Part Tim
Date: 2007-01-05 11:18 pm (UTC)Such wonderful layers you've woven here.
Again, merely a few lines of his that I loved;
non-linear, disorganized, chaotic array of flashes of memory ripped through him, dragging out emotions as they whipsawed through his mind, leaving his heart as raw as it had been while he washed the traces of their encounter from his skin
Oh, my merciful heavens, but this was perfect. It's such a TIM-description of having his heart-broken in two.
=It’s too long between weekends as it is, if he didn’t want to see me at all, I... don’t know what I’d do.=
Gods, but it's amazing how simultaneously wonderful/agonizing the Bats can be when they drop the Batty disguise and to thine ownselves are true. OW.
HA! to the Selina+Timmy exchange. *potentially adds to 12 days of crack pairings.* I loved the Selina voice you captured. It was the perfect mix of warm/seductive/naughty/caring that defines the character for me.
You’re just the (dirty little) secret he wishes he didn’t have to keep./
*cries for him.* Ah, such a young little Robin, and yet the feelings of self doubt and loathing start to creep in. Fight it, precious.
It was interesting how easily hope turned to bitterness, he noted idly.
I. . . am possibly going to steal that for iconage, I think. It sums up DC so well. Also, it was a gloriously Timmy thought to have. So self aware.
Bitter, bitter laughter on his ears, and if the expression was a knife that sound was a gunshot wound
Such a pretty play on words. And it seems appropriately Battish to make an analogy based on knife wounds and gunshot wounds. :)
Such pretty smut, too. Such pretty, in character smut. Kon moaned, not soft, and bucked back against him again, //Oh... oh, yes...// trying to get him deeper, get more... the angle wasn’t right, he needed--"Tim, more..." he begged, sure Tim would know how to make this perfect.. is a glorious mental image, but more importantly, sums up the person that Tim is, the person that Kon is, and how they relate to each other so well.
This, again, was wonderful. It captured Kon/Tim perfectly.