Ohhh!! Wings! Pretty! Does this have to do with the icon I saw merfilly sporting? Because, pretty! And Batman/Black Canary! My oh my, the het is spreading!
I really liked the story. I think you handled Dinah's freak out was very well. I mean, wings! I would freak out too, as cool as they might be, if they hurt and totally ruin your fighting style, equilibrium, etc. Batman's calm, collected advice, and his willingness to help, I think it's perfect. It's human!Batman, the guy who is a loner with the biggest junior superhero academy in DCU, the walking dichotomy. Cold, calm, warm, concerned.
I'm going to enjoy the actual logistics of wings a lot if you continue it, I definitely enjoyed them in this story. They might look pretty, but they are big, and they can't be comfortable, and how do you keep people from recognizing you when you have wings? I look forward to reading more, this was awesome :)
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Date: 2006-07-15 05:04 am (UTC)I really liked the story. I think you handled Dinah's freak out was very well. I mean, wings! I would freak out too, as cool as they might be, if they hurt and totally ruin your fighting style, equilibrium, etc. Batman's calm, collected advice, and his willingness to help, I think it's perfect. It's human!Batman, the guy who is a loner with the biggest junior superhero academy in DCU, the walking dichotomy. Cold, calm, warm, concerned.
I'm going to enjoy the actual logistics of wings a lot if you continue it, I definitely enjoyed them in this story. They might look pretty, but they are big, and they can't be comfortable, and how do you keep people from recognizing you when you have wings? I look forward to reading more, this was awesome :)