Oh, look, they're putting things past them. Like heroes should do, perhaps?
Yes, exactly like they ought to.
This made me start crying all over again. The whole exchange with Hal and Ollie was so very perfect. "Hal wrapped his arm hard around Ollie's shoulders, hand fisting into the shirt to let him know he wasn't alone." So, regardless of whether they're brothers or lovers in this 'verse, gods, I'm glad that Ollie has Hal. And your Hal feels very true to character as well.
Neither of them has told me which they are, but I'm glad Hal's there, too. I based my Hal from you and Filly, so I'm joyous that he works for you.
And I have to love a Hal that glares at Bats. *g*
Hal's thoughts: //you are gonna tell me how to handle Ollie?! F*** off!//
The Titans. Oh, Lord.
Yeah, tell me about it.
*Claps.* Thank you for that.
It seemed perfect.
Raven was one of my favorite Titans, back in the day, even though she's a walking plot device. So, I'm very glad to see her cameo here.
I love, lust, and Adore Raven. Screw cameo, she gets PLACE in this fic. Because I can. But thank you!
I love how in control your Vic is here, too, in the beginning. And even later, as he's falling apart, he remains very...stoically in pain. Because a BL-esque breakdown wouldn't have worked for him.
Thank you! *happy* Vic's... Vic. He's a leader, he has to keepittogethernomatterwhat. That's just how he is.
"With Dick missing, you're her posted next of kin." AWWWWW. See, I was only a Dick/Kory fan for about ten minutes back in the day, but I LOVED having Dick as her next of kin. It's... AW.
Tell me about it. God, that hurt to realize, and hurt more to write down.
Also? Oh, Dick, how could you?
A contract is a contract is a contract.
Never mind, I know the answer to that.
See above.
*Sighs, and feels conflicted some more about my love/hate for Evil!Dick.*
Yeah. Me too.
"His voice was helpless, shaken, and he looked so young... //They're all so young.//" *Sniffle.* Yes, Batman, they are. *hugs Vic and tries to shake the Toon Vic out of head, because he makes it hurt even more than Comic!Vic.*
Oh, god, I didn't need that image... *weeps*
"Right. I'll do that," and Cyborg's head dropped into his hands, elbows braced on his knees. "I never wanted to do this again," his voice soft, almost broken. "I... I'll get on it."
And I just had to stop here and sob for a few minutes. I don't even like Donna, but all I could think was how bad they all hurt at the end of Graduation Day. I just - OW. It ripped out my heart AGAIN.
Does it help any to know that I had to get up, go get a drink of water and try to remember how to breathe, because doing this ripped me apart? I don't like her either, but... exactly what you said.
"Beast Boy changed shape, and a large cat pushed its way under Vic's arms to sit on him, purring with stress and fear, and Batman nodded once." Well, of course. Because they're married.
Yup. They are.
And Robin. Oh, Robin.
Yeah... oh, god Timmy BABY!!! is about my reaction to everything I wrote for him.
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Date: 2006-09-15 03:11 am (UTC)Yes, exactly like they ought to.
This made me start crying all over again. The whole exchange with Hal and Ollie was so very perfect. "Hal wrapped his arm hard around Ollie's shoulders, hand fisting into the shirt to let him know he wasn't alone." So, regardless of whether they're brothers or lovers in this 'verse, gods, I'm glad that Ollie has Hal. And your Hal feels very true to character as well.
Neither of them has told me which they are, but I'm glad Hal's there, too. I based my Hal from you and Filly, so I'm joyous that he works for you.
And I have to love a Hal that glares at Bats. *g*
Hal's thoughts: //you are gonna tell me how to handle Ollie?! F*** off!//
The Titans. Oh, Lord.
Yeah, tell me about it.
*Claps.* Thank you for that.
It seemed perfect.
Raven was one of my favorite Titans, back in the day, even though she's a walking plot device. So, I'm very glad to see her cameo here.
I love, lust, and Adore Raven. Screw cameo, she gets PLACE in this fic. Because I can. But thank you!
I love how in control your Vic is here, too, in the beginning. And even later, as he's falling apart, he remains very...stoically in pain. Because a BL-esque breakdown wouldn't have worked for him.
Thank you! *happy* Vic's... Vic. He's a leader, he has to keepittogethernomatterwhat. That's just how he is.
"With Dick missing, you're her posted next of kin."
AWWWWW. See, I was only a Dick/Kory fan for about ten minutes back in the day, but I LOVED having Dick as her next of kin. It's... AW.
Tell me about it. God, that hurt to realize, and hurt more to write down.
Also? Oh, Dick, how could you?
A contract is a contract is a contract.
Never mind, I know the answer to that.
See above.
*Sighs, and feels conflicted some more about my love/hate for Evil!Dick.*
Yeah. Me too.
"His voice was helpless, shaken, and he looked so young... //They're all so young.//"
*Sniffle.* Yes, Batman, they are. *hugs Vic and tries to shake the Toon Vic out of head, because he makes it hurt even more than Comic!Vic.*
Oh, god, I didn't need that image... *weeps*
"Right. I'll do that," and Cyborg's head dropped into his hands, elbows braced on his knees. "I never wanted to do this again," his voice soft, almost broken. "I... I'll get on it."
And I just had to stop here and sob for a few minutes. I don't even like Donna, but all I could think was how bad they all hurt at the end of Graduation Day. I just - OW. It ripped out my heart AGAIN.
Does it help any to know that I had to get up, go get a drink of water and try to remember how to breathe, because doing this ripped me apart? I don't like her either, but... exactly what you said.
"Beast Boy changed shape, and a large cat pushed its way under Vic's arms to sit on him, purring with stress and fear, and Batman nodded once."
Well, of course. Because they're married.
Yup. They are.
And Robin. Oh, Robin.
Yeah... oh, god Timmy BABY!!! is about my reaction to everything I wrote for him.