Date: 2006-12-05 01:53 am (UTC)
Well, it's obviously late for me to vote on continuing, but I would have, and since you are--all is well!

Oh, the Jason/Bruce dynamic here is yummy in the extreme. For some reason, these lines:

"I have little choice, Jason. This... is hardly tolerable. I appear younger than Dick."

"Only slightly," Jason replied, and Bruce could not see any reaction more than that in the careful stillness of his face.


Made me desperately want some Jason/Bruce going on. I just couldn't help but read that as Jason being disturbed at how attractive Bruce was.

And loved the image of Bruce in his robe, "traces of magic sliding along his skin"--it sounds somewhat erotic and unnerving at the same time.

*runs off to read the next part*
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