Date: 2006-09-23 11:48 am (UTC)
Here's Concrit no. 1 - the nice part :)

THE THINGS I LVOE ABOUT THIS PART.

The insinuation that what the heroes did to Batman was a major screw up to the relationship of Batman and Robin. Made Bruce so much of an ass hole that it was beyond repair. Will give Dick more than enough motivation to hit the JLA.

Dick's love for Bruce still there, though Slade's has replaced it. And Slade understanding that and notholding it against him.

Slade thinking like a soldier, understanding why the JLA did not break ranks just to preserve the peace of the corps.

The meeting between Shiva and Slade. Here is a meeting of Titans (sorry wrong word) The respect for eachother's gifts is there, btu so is the caution and underneah it all an acute understanding of a shared code.

Would love to see more between the animosity of Dick and Dinahover Babs.

The motherly love between Dinah and Roy showing through, even at that darkest moment when the heroes were shown to have clay feet.

And Slade above it all, plotting, manipulating, calculating.


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