Re: Part B--grr, formatting

Date: 2006-11-08 12:06 am (UTC)
ilyena_sylph: picture of Labyrinth!faerie with 'careful, i bite' as text (audrey too)
From: [personal profile] ilyena_sylph
Oh - Timmy! *insert mandatory sobbing about Kon.*
And. ..yeah. In a couple of months, you'll be wearing his colors, Tim, so . . . get used to them.


Yes, that would be the notthinkingaboutit person in question, though there was also some thinking about Jason involved.

*g* Good boy, smart Robin - very Timmy-like. And the whole "her city" possessiveness is a Bat-trait down to the very core.

*nodnodnod* Yes, very Timmy and very smart--and he's polite. This city is her territory, not his, it's her lead.

Awww! Such a Timmy thought. . . to bring everything back to Robin.

Isn't that his canon?

I really enjoyed the way you showed their actual patrolling (you write the actual ACTION plot so well!) *is jealous.* It had a definite sense of . . .duty and FUN and in the bloodness

*beams* Sankyuu! Now, see, I never thought I did, but you keep telling me I do... and *nodnod* yes. Duty and FUN and this is who we are all the way.

Awww - these little slices of life that you throw in the fics? Really ground the story and make the characters come to life. It's the story equivalent of Alex Ross art.

*flushes, ducks head* Thank you so much... *stunned*

Such pride in his name/lineage/role. *kicks DC for forgetting that, at least in the Titans book.*

*joins in the kicking*

*g* He's kidding. .. so on his way to healing. *insert happy cooing noises.*

*more nodding* Yes. He's better enough to tease her at least a little.

All Connor Sex = Should Now include Magical Massages as foreplay. Yes. and I know that it wasn't foreplay here. But still. . .needs to be said.

*chuckle* The boy is hella good with his hands, that's canon, and all that Eastern training... Made sense to me. I'm not sure why you think it's not foreplay, Kyle did...

Also? The back and forth between Speedy/Robin and Kyle/Connor (and later the rest of the house) was lovely and a brilliant way to show time passage/action. . .am so stealing this technique, btw

*grins* That's what happens when you're writing in IM, you find yourself winding up doing this, and since this time it worked, we kept it the way it was. And you're welcome to steal.

*giggles madly.* I love this exchange. Again with the feisty! And the "We are partners. We will kick your ass together." is so very MUCH in the tradition of Speedy/Robin. And for that, I want them to be real so I can hug them and threaten to beat them if they repeat their mentors' stupidity. There will never be an Ass!Mia, though. NEVER, DC.

*grins* Robin finds it highly offensive that any bunch of street toughs has the balls to hunt Speedy. It offends him right down to his soul and he refuses to put up with it. And yes, them to be real would be awesome.

I want to say something constructive and/or coherent, but the fact that Kyle casually refers to Connor as "his." Awww.

They're going to get married, I think he has the right to.

Alfred= sneaky. Also, Aww, Lian for giggling. I love how normal all these relationships are to that little girl. She's going to grow up to be an awesome, awesome member of society. And possible rule the world.

Alfred does = sneaky. And a giggling Lian is the cutest thing. And I just figure there's no way Roy's daughter was gonna grow up prejudiced. Just no way. And yes, she is.
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