I totally just found this story. Series. Thing. Oh, my God! You FIXED everything! While I'm not sure I could take that in a fanfic that wasn't fully aware of itself, you're doing a decent job of walking the line between Mary Sue-perfect and just plain adorable. Though the giant bringing-people-back festival that was New Year's came close to annoyingly perfect . . . So far, everything's adorable. I have love.
I love how you developed Mia and Tim's relationship . . . I keep forgetting I know next to nothing about her cannon character, I have so much love for yours. Her best-friendness with Tim pre-Kon was fantastic, I have such a weakness for best friend pairs, and then the three of them as friends, and then . . . in HappyVerse, its natural evolution!
The intermingling of families and relationships in HappyVerse is complicated and amazing. I really enjoy the way things combine and the real annoyances that crop up because of it. It's nice that even though this is called HappyVerse, those misunderstandings and things still happen -- they just get fixed before things go TOO badly wrong. And hey, good side-effect of Dinah pissing Kon off!
I *squealed* like a horrible *fangirl* when you brought Ted back. Took me WAY too long to figure out who it was, and then there was squeeing.
So, yes. I have a lot of love for this series, and can't wait to see more (and see if you're teasing us all with the dropped hints about Dinah maybe being pregnant . . !)
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Date: 2007-02-05 06:49 am (UTC)I totally just found this story. Series. Thing. Oh, my God! You FIXED everything! While I'm not sure I could take that in a fanfic that wasn't fully aware of itself, you're doing a decent job of walking the line between Mary Sue-perfect and just plain adorable. Though the giant bringing-people-back festival that was New Year's came close to annoyingly perfect . . . So far, everything's adorable. I have love.
I love how you developed Mia and Tim's relationship . . . I keep forgetting I know next to nothing about her cannon character, I have so much love for yours. Her best-friendness with Tim pre-Kon was fantastic, I have such a weakness for best friend pairs, and then the three of them as friends, and then . . . in HappyVerse, its natural evolution!
The intermingling of families and relationships in HappyVerse is complicated and amazing. I really enjoy the way things combine and the real annoyances that crop up because of it. It's nice that even though this is called HappyVerse, those misunderstandings and things still happen -- they just get fixed before things go TOO badly wrong. And hey, good side-effect of Dinah pissing Kon off!
I *squealed* like a horrible *fangirl* when you brought Ted back. Took me WAY too long to figure out who it was, and then there was squeeing.
So, yes. I have a lot of love for this series, and can't wait to see more (and see if you're teasing us all with the dropped hints about Dinah maybe being pregnant . . !)