Discovery, or fanfic again

[sylph_fics]

I said I posted this to my lj, so I probably ought to do so.

This is NC-17, it's comic-book slash (male/male) fanfic, and if that's not your cup of tea (or you're underage, and you know exactly who I'm talking to, you!) please to leave now.

Thanks go out to amarin_rose and the_artist_19 who caught dozens of errors in characterization, repitivity, and plain lack of creativity.

Oh. Yeah. This is that sequel to Puberty, the Tim/Kon crack fic.

Title: Discovery
Pairing: Tim/Kon
Rating: NC-17

Please visit the following URL for the fic: https://archiveofourown.org/works/11046

Comments

Part Kon

[pervyficgirl.livejournal.com]

Mmm. So much love for this. So few happy Tim/Kon fics have come across my sights lately, and this just felt like a warm hug for the cynical portion of my soul that DC created.

I love, love, love Kon's internal dialog. He felt so extremely teenage-guyish. His early frustration at having the (relative) comfort of his teenage world turned on its ear. . . followed by the slow dawning of the undeniable truth being fought with Kon-gusto. . and the eventual surrender to what they both wanted was tremendously well written. It really felt like I was inside Kon's head, so vividly were his thoughts described.

(merely) A few of my favorite lines from him:

/Oh. That damned train. 15 miles away and it sounds like it’s right in my ear and scares me half to death.//
*sigh.* I wish Smallville would do things like that. Because it makes so much sense for someone just coming into such extraordinary powers would have these reactions. In context of the story it works so well because it's one of a series of tiny, world-building events that makes the landscape of your story so rich, full and three-dimensional.

He wasn’t gay, he liked girls and women just fine thankyouverymuch, and he’d be a hell of a lot happier if his wet dreams would quit featuring his best friend, please!
Much the way I imagine the situation feels for a teenage boy. ;)

He felt himself shake, realized he'd wrapped his hand around himself, jerking himself off at the same pace Tim'd used.
Kon, honey? That's not just a clue you're infatuated. It's a huge, freaking neon sign.

He didn't want to change how he thought of himself, but when you're getting off thinking about your best (and very male) friend fucking you, there's a little problem with thinking you're straight.
*gigglesnortflail.* Oh, Kon, just a tad.

//You’d think teachers could be a little understanding when a guy’s trying to figure out how his whole life can get turned upside down by something that isn’t even his choice... but no.//

*g* It's good to know that teachers in the town that gave us Superman weren't any more kind than the 99% of the rest of the world's.

The release had barely taken the edge off, and Tim’s blue eyes had once again been what drove him over.
*G* Of course.

He slid his upper hand over Tim’s shoulder, feeling smooth skin over hard muscle--and then catching the different texture of the scars littered across it...
Scar Kink FTW.

Re: Part Kon

[ilyena_sylph]

Mmm. So much love for this. So few happy Tim/Kon fics have come across my sights lately, and this just felt like a warm hug for the cynical portion of my soul that DC created.

Wrote it before Crisis ended, praise gods. Or I'd have cried too hard to write it.

I love, love, love Kon's internal dialog. He felt so extremely teenage-guyish.

Thank you thank you! *beams*

His early frustration at having the (relative) comfort of his teenage world turned on its ear. . . followed by the slow dawning of the undeniable truth being fought with Kon-gusto. . and the eventual surrender to what they both wanted was tremendously well written.

Wow. Thank you SO much. That's the buildup I was after.

It really felt like I was inside Kon's head, so vividly were his thoughts described.

And thank you again. That's what I was aiming for. *beam*

(merely) A few of my favorite lines from him:

*grin*

*sigh.* I wish Smallville would do things like that. Because it makes so much sense for someone just coming into such extraordinary powers would have these reactions. In context of the story it works so well because it's one of a series of tiny, world-building events that makes the landscape of your story so rich, full and three-dimensional.

*bounces up and down and squees* Thank you so much! Figuring out what'd scared him awake was interesting.

Much the way I imagine the situation feels for a teenage boy. ;)

Yeah. Pretty much, that's how I think it ought to go...

Kon, honey? That's not just a clue you're infatuated. It's a huge, freaking neon sign.

Well, yeah. But he's kind-of in denial.

*gigglesnortflail.* Oh, Kon, just a tad.

Just a bitty-bit. And the marianas trench is a small crack in the pavement.

*g* It's good to know that teachers in the town that gave us Superman weren't any more kind than the 99% of the rest of the world's.

Nope, and most of them are still right there.

*G* Of course.

Freaked him the hell out, too.

Scar Kink FTW.

So. Much. Yes.