Discovery, or fanfic again

[sylph_fics]

I said I posted this to my lj, so I probably ought to do so.

This is NC-17, it's comic-book slash (male/male) fanfic, and if that's not your cup of tea (or you're underage, and you know exactly who I'm talking to, you!) please to leave now.

Thanks go out to amarin_rose and the_artist_19 who caught dozens of errors in characterization, repitivity, and plain lack of creativity.

Oh. Yeah. This is that sequel to Puberty, the Tim/Kon crack fic.

Title: Discovery
Pairing: Tim/Kon
Rating: NC-17

Please visit the following URL for the fic: https://archiveofourown.org/works/11046

Comments

[amarin-rose.livejournal.com]

Nrg. I just reread this for, like, the tenth time. Still wonderful and hot and wonderful and sexy and wonderful and angsty and wonderful and schmoopy and wonderful and hot and...

Did I mention this was wonderful? I only wish I could write intricately plotted stuff like this. And, well, hot sex. :D

[ilyena_sylph]

*grins* Yes, you did mention that it was wonderful--and so is your feedback! You make me a very happy critter. And, you made this so much better...

*g* I'm never sure if how I write sex works as well for anyone else as it does for me, but when I get feedback like this, I think it can't be too bad (and actually may be as hot as I thought it was when I wrote it.)

*beams happily*

[amarin-rose.livejournal.com]

Considering it's only barely NC-17, it's very hot. It somewhat reminds me of the way that I write sex - when I can manage to write it, and it comes out well, which is seldom.

[ilyena_sylph]

I dunno, you did damned well with that thing you sent me a little bit ago. *G* I'm still going through it in detail, but... ooooh, yeah! *happy noises*